By: Elphinstone Dayrell
This story was short and to the point. It had a lesson it it as well. The lesson being that you need to understand your situation and understand the consequences before you go into things.
The sun wondered why the water never visited him?
The sun had to build a bigger place so that the water and his friends could visit.
The sun built a bigger place and people started coming over.
As people started coming over, the place became more and more crowded.
The water began rising higher and higher.
After a while, the water was so high that the sun and the moon were forced to go to the ceiling, which is why they are so high in the sky.
Could change: characters
story line
include a lesson?
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